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prayer of hope, for young and old, who suffer from the slings and arrows sadness and the loss of love; I offer up this prayer of hope and offer you my hand around your shoulders until you no longer require it more than once, for lengthy periods, by events, other people, my self was eradicated and limping from day to night, and J faced absolutes, choices choking, alternating alternatives that offered zero, or even less than zero, and the inkwell wasn't refillable, and I could point to nothing yet encouraging a mystifying purposed existence then came a woman who asked nor proffered conditionals pre, prior post or otherwise and offered up the miraculous drink, human kindly notice, snd it drained the bitters, began fluid replacement, and slow resuscitation and then poems rebirthed me,  liberated the angry sacred gory sadness words devoid of glory, with a reworded score, and the eyes could write without a patina filter of jaundiced hatred, and whispered private internally many times a beloving hallelujah and when ever the remembrance of the near misses are crackly occasionally appearing, the surge dissipates intact quick into a netherworld for suppressing and bid "away with you," and a thin lipped smile part sneer for having survived even prospered when                     then came a woman and the self, the my self, returned after an absence of destructed decades...deadening decades and I smile when the grandchildren tell me knock knock jokes and gently knock me on the head, to make sure I'm alert, then came woman who had already~all ready knocked me on the heart
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Jul 9, 2025
Jul 9, 2025 at 9:32 AM UTC
Then Came Woman/Reflections: The Absence of Self
prayer of hope, for young and old, who suffer from the slings and arrows sadness and the loss of love; I offer up this prayer of hope and offer you my hand around your shoulders until you no longer require it more than once, for lengthy periods, by events, other people, my self was eradicated and limping from day to night, and J faced absolutes, choices choking, alternating alternatives that offered zero, or even less than zero, and the inkwell wasn't refillable, and I could point to nothing yet encouraging a mystifying purposed existence then came a woman who asked nor proffered conditionals pre, prior post or otherwise and offered up the miraculous drink, human kindly notice, snd it drained the bitters, began fluid replacement, and slow resuscitation and then poems rebirthed me,  liberated the angry sacred gory sadness words devoid of glory, with a reworded score, and the eyes could write without a patina filter of jaundiced hatred, and whispered private internally many times a beloving hallelujah and when ever the remembrance of the near misses are crackly occasionally appearing, the surge dissipates intact quick into a netherworld for suppressing and bid "away with you," and a thin lipped smile part sneer for having survived even prospered when                     then came a woman and the self, the my self, returned after an absence of destructed decades...deadening decades and I smile when the grandchildren tell me knock knock jokes and gently knock me on the head, to make sure I'm alert, then came woman who had already~all ready knocked me on the heart
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Jul 9, 2025
Jul 9, 2025 at 9:32 AM UTC
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