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We were a table apart. So close—yet impossibly far. That table separated the stars from the earth. Light-years between us, different timelines, different planets. She fell first. I arrived four years too late. Now she moves forward while I remain in the past— a past that cannot be undone and a future that cannot be rewritten. So I sit and wonder: Why give everything only to end with nothing again?
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Mar 12
Mar 12, 2026 at 11:15 AM UTC
Distance of remiss
We were a table apart. So close—yet impossibly far. That table separated the stars from the earth. Light-years between us, different timelines, different planets. She fell first. I arrived four years too late. Now she moves forward while I remain in the past— a past that cannot be undone and a future that cannot be rewritten. So I sit and wonder: Why give everything only to end with nothing again?
For those who don't know "remiss" is failing to act, or being negligent, when you should have acted I wrote this poem from the lonely distance I felt when I saw her across the table on our friends birthday, the regret I felt—thinking I should've acted faster when I had the chance, realized my feeling a beat quicker Therefore I named it "distance of remiss"
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Mar 12
Mar 12, 2026 at 11:15 AM UTC
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