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Looking down at empty pale feet Pure crystal water Kissing the gaunt quivering toes Like tiny nipping lips An intoxicating dewy tickle Replenishes the ulcerated legs Thin iced glass brushes the face Coating it in a soft chilled frost Salty needles pinch the eyes Making vision blurry yet refreshed To blink would be a miss A loss of excessive sight An immense beauty gone A crawling land of beryl A saturated endless terrene An ocean
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Jun 12, 2012
Jun 12, 2012 at 9:34 AM UTC
Land Of Beryl
Looking down at empty pale feet Pure crystal water Kissing the gaunt quivering toes Like tiny nipping lips An intoxicating dewy tickle Replenishes the ulcerated legs Thin iced glass brushes the face Coating it in a soft chilled frost Salty needles pinch the eyes Making vision blurry yet refreshed To blink would be a miss A loss of excessive sight An immense beauty gone A crawling land of beryl A saturated endless terrene An ocean
I went on a trip to Florida for business.  I didn't get to go in the ocean, but I got to look at it.  This is what my mind was imagining.
paul-celano
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Jun 12, 2012
Jun 12, 2012 at 9:34 AM UTC
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