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paul-celano
paul-celano
American I have a sad story that helped me write. Back in High School a good friend of mine had took his own life. I wrote a poem about it for a class. The teacher told me to my face that I should never write again because my writing is not good enough. / / Later in 2002 I took a class for creative writing. I told the college teacher what my high school teacher said. The teacher then told me that in the class I was in, I would have to read my poems out loud. This made me very nervous. / / So the day came when I had to do this. I read the same poem I was told in high school was not good enough. Everyone stood and clapped. My college teacher told me to never stop writing. / / I have been writing since then. Things I see and things that happen in my life. I love to write free-verse and sometimes a little rhyme for fun. Also I believe that a thesaurus is a poets best friend.
Feeling unparalleled Uncomfortably disconnected Baffled in one's own still reality Sitting in a chill hollow theater A sharp lit lantern glistens from above Frying the lid of the huddled mind Sore eyes glazed over Watching a hushed movie called life The characters known and their euphoria The whole story just seems absolute Only to one's imagination glasses Seeing the whole kindled screen The still beating heart can tell something is missing Cheerless eyes start to wipe off the fake Each drive of coral to the heart Opens truth's glutted box The one watching is the missing The story was never whole For the characters were embedded in life's credits And the one watching was forgotten
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Jun 12, 2012
Jun 12, 2012 at 9:43 AM UTC
Truth's Glutted Box
Looking down at empty pale feet Pure crystal water Kissing the gaunt quivering toes Like tiny nipping lips An intoxicating dewy tickle Replenishes the ulcerated legs Thin iced glass brushes the face Coating it in a soft chilled frost Salty needles pinch the eyes Making vision blurry yet refreshed To blink would be a miss A loss of excessive sight An immense beauty gone A crawling land of beryl A saturated endless terrene An ocean
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Jun 12, 2012
Jun 12, 2012 at 9:34 AM UTC
Land Of Beryl
Bundled up and toasted Stare to the exorbitant heavens A dimmed electrifying spirit world Leaving only one trifling light on A slight single frozen tear Rides the broad frigid air To the glaring reality below The silky cotton takes time Flowing through a lingering life Of chilled floating bliss It taps the up turned nose Tiny frozen feet make a stand An intense tickle flows through the pumping veins Leaving a feeling of pricking cherub kisses Nervous life lungs squeeze Releasing a single reclined breath Concrete relaxed steam Rubs the tufted sapped lips Dissolving into the hazed sky She has arrived Mother Winter
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Nov 30, 2010
Nov 30, 2010 at 5:09 AM UTC
First Snowflake
Stab my eyes I don’t want to see anymore I want a dark black canvas Where I can paint my own world Using my minds brush Dipped and dripping with creativity A clear and cool world One that makes it easier to breath When I close my eyes All I have to do is be still The only worry I have When my eyes open A collage of problems form Tensing up my body Stab my eyes With eyes shut You are God You create your world No pain No problems Just a dream A dream is not a reality A dream is a vision A vision of what it could be Until I am forced to open these windows And let in the harshness of the world Stab my eyes
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Nov 30, 2010
Nov 30, 2010 at 5:08 AM UTC
A Dream Is Not A Reality
One to smile One to frown Mouth goes up Mouth goes down Emotions will make one drown That was one crazy dream Eyes open Eyes are close See the day One arose Both sit on top of the nose That was one crazy dream Body stretch Body still A few cracks What a thrill So much more time left to **** That was one crazy dream What’s the time Early day Punch the clock One must stay Am still tired anyway Back to the one crazy dream
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Sep 30, 2010
Sep 30, 2010 at 6:15 AM UTC
Crazy Dream
My body is a place of tunes The perfect set list My living band SCREAM! The warm blood fills my worded heart Wrap it in the pointed wire of the treble Embody it with the empowering bass CLEF! Breathing deep lung drums Power grabbing Boom Boom BOOM! Pull the strings from my lyrical soul Flick each tiny cell I have Create the harmony of my world LIFE! REALITY! …music
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Sep 28, 2010
Sep 28, 2010 at 8:24 AM UTC
Body Of Tunes
It starts with a glance Each person stares to connect But must be careful Or a pure life could be wrecked Love can feel strong Looking into eyes not blind They can make you melt Or destroy your once strong mind A hug can be tough For tightness can be the best For if arms are loose Then the warmth becomes dead rest A kiss can be sweet Sugar cotton candy turn Or pure dark evil Tingle to an acid burn To fall for ones soul Brings the pressure to the top So the body shakes And the heartbeat will not stop But take it away The feeling will fall to death So that one deep sigh Becomes one person’s last breath To play with ones heart May seem easy at the time But pain is not right Back at bottom, hard to climb
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Aug 29, 2010
Aug 29, 2010 at 6:28 PM UTC
Heart Playing
Coffee, coffee, drip drip drip Makes eyes pop, with every sip Some call it, a fine brown wine Off the yummy, young bean vine Robust in taste, like a sweet Crystal sugar, for a treat Turn the color, to a white Sometimes makes you, feel just right Or take it pure, in the black Makes you shake, like you’re on crack Have a small, to perk you up Little happy, in a cup Have a large, to blow your mind Eyes bulge out, until you’re blind Take it cold, on a hot day Life turns gold, instead of gray Take it hot, in the ice cold To stay awake, eyes won’t fold Coffee, coffee, sip sip sip **** it’s gone, with no last drip Caffeine wore off, in a flash Mind shuts off, body will crash My eyes are shut, I count sheep Guess it’s time, to fall asleep
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Jul 8, 2010
Jul 8, 2010 at 7:37 AM UTC
Coffee
I am a white mage I have a level five staff I cannot get girls
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Jul 8, 2010
Jul 8, 2010 at 6:16 AM UTC
Haiku 3 - White Mage
I have dejavu Why do things keep repeating? I have dejavu
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Jul 8, 2010
Jul 8, 2010 at 6:15 AM UTC
Haiku 2 - Dejavu