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i feel aged i feel ruined i feel the greatest depths of the ocean i feel the plummeting canyons and dark trenches i feel worn i feel useless i feel alone in all forms of the word i feel completely exhausted of life and of a sane state of mind i feel a vacant ache i feel an inky bruise i feel the indelible marks left by every word to exit your mouth which have struck me so firmly in the back i feel discordant eyes upon me i feel you avert your gaze as I draw near i feel the rise of your heart in your chest and the wave of emotion from your soul but not mine i feel i feel i feel i feel too much yet i feel nothing at all
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Oct 26, 2013
Oct 26, 2013 at 9:32 PM UTC
how are you?
i feel aged i feel ruined i feel the greatest depths of the ocean i feel the plummeting canyons and dark trenches i feel worn i feel useless i feel alone in all forms of the word i feel completely exhausted of life and of a sane state of mind i feel a vacant ache i feel an inky bruise i feel the indelible marks left by every word to exit your mouth which have struck me so firmly in the back i feel discordant eyes upon me i feel you avert your gaze as I draw near i feel the rise of your heart in your chest and the wave of emotion from your soul but not mine i feel i feel i feel i feel too much yet i feel nothing at all
sarah-camacho
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Oct 26, 2013
Oct 26, 2013 at 9:32 PM UTC
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