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im standing, barely     trying to see what's around me im crying but no one can hear,     not really people throw their advice at me and it hits hard like ice against my skin    and all i want is for someone to hear me     to really listen they keep giving me words i did not ask for    we love you, we’re here for you keep it; give it up     life is hard; welcome to adult life i open up to you    but it’s still not enough you’re the one who sees me cry;    my tears are hidden by my smiles to everyone else you’re the one who knows my pain;     my laugh hides the torment from the outsiders here i am, standing, barely wishing you knew that i have given you all there is to give.
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Jan 9, 2018
Jan 9, 2018 at 11:59 AM UTC
barely standing
im standing, barely     trying to see what's around me im crying but no one can hear,     not really people throw their advice at me and it hits hard like ice against my skin    and all i want is for someone to hear me     to really listen they keep giving me words i did not ask for    we love you, we’re here for you keep it; give it up     life is hard; welcome to adult life i open up to you    but it’s still not enough you’re the one who sees me cry;    my tears are hidden by my smiles to everyone else you’re the one who knows my pain;     my laugh hides the torment from the outsiders here i am, standing, barely wishing you knew that i have given you all there is to give.
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Jan 9, 2018
Jan 9, 2018 at 11:59 AM UTC
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