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Imagine yourself working hard, working as if you were feeding your family of ten How would you react the moment when you're done, the reward, wine for uncorking but the next day it's gone, everything is gone you had a chance, were happy for all you accomplished and it's gone. The worst drawn feeling, known for and by, and there's nothing to do, to try and change, but you don't try, because why bother, it has left your life most likely lifelike like facts, facts on the other side of a rushhouring road. Loading, loading, new ideas in progress, a huge load of chances coming up, but you're not even slightly interested When the one important thing is gone, the rest falls along.
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Feb 24, 2014
Feb 24, 2014 at 3:34 PM UTC
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Imagine yourself working hard, working as if you were feeding your family of ten How would you react the moment when you're done, the reward, wine for uncorking but the next day it's gone, everything is gone you had a chance, were happy for all you accomplished and it's gone. The worst drawn feeling, known for and by, and there's nothing to do, to try and change, but you don't try, because why bother, it has left your life most likely lifelike like facts, facts on the other side of a rushhouring road. Loading, loading, new ideas in progress, a huge load of chances coming up, but you're not even slightly interested When the one important thing is gone, the rest falls along.
I wrote it too quickly, it can't be artistically perfect, but hey, you catch my drift
Daan
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Belgian
Feb 24, 2014
Feb 24, 2014 at 3:34 PM UTC
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