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Please forgive me I know not what I do I’m living in a bubble and I can’t see through Walking in a daze, an ambient haze That’s so thick that I’ll never really see you I walk around in a dream, while my life passes me by I’m filled with fear, it floods my head And I don’t even know why… The voices in my head, They ebb and flow, and startlingly grow If only I knew how close I was To the stillness that speaks To the light that shines and ultimately sublimes Opens your eyes to the wonders around And even the sights and sounds The one word that will change your life Take you up to new heights Now always remember, That word is… Surrender
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Sep 11, 2013
Sep 11, 2013 at 6:06 PM UTC
Surrender
Please forgive me I know not what I do I’m living in a bubble and I can’t see through Walking in a daze, an ambient haze That’s so thick that I’ll never really see you I walk around in a dream, while my life passes me by I’m filled with fear, it floods my head And I don’t even know why… The voices in my head, They ebb and flow, and startlingly grow If only I knew how close I was To the stillness that speaks To the light that shines and ultimately sublimes Opens your eyes to the wonders around And even the sights and sounds The one word that will change your life Take you up to new heights Now always remember, That word is… Surrender
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South African
Sep 11, 2013
Sep 11, 2013 at 6:06 PM UTC
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