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I come from Saturn, That which has a halo; That plain of poppies, which tells tales of the *Sarbadars' honors and heartfelt feelings. It is mid-July— and finally the height of summer! I come from Saturn, from *Kayvan; I come from the unwritten line of the silent self, from the seventh square of this chessboard; Arriving with no soldiers nor sound; Naught but a bleeding drum! Where all guns are silenced and suppressed; I come from the lineage of a spirit Whom has words left unsaid, And a thirst for the guillotine; I come from the shifting face of the *Sayyaara and stars! Speak in whispers, for here— voices appear from the well-hidden, silent stones at the edge of the graveyard!
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Apr 14
Apr 14, 2026 at 7:30 PM UTC
The Prideful Saturnian
I come from Saturn, That which has a halo; That plain of poppies, which tells tales of the *Sarbadars' honors and heartfelt feelings. It is mid-July— and finally the height of summer! I come from Saturn, from *Kayvan; I come from the unwritten line of the silent self, from the seventh square of this chessboard; Arriving with no soldiers nor sound; Naught but a bleeding drum! Where all guns are silenced and suppressed; I come from the lineage of a spirit Whom has words left unsaid, And a thirst for the guillotine; I come from the shifting face of the *Sayyaara and stars! Speak in whispers, for here— voices appear from the well-hidden, silent stones at the edge of the graveyard!
A mix and match of translation and heavy paraphrasing from a Persian poem (upon the poet's own request) with a semi heroic tone. Explanations to marked words written below: Sarbadars: Secular rulers and dervishes from the Khorasan region Kayvan: Also known as Keyvan, it is the Farsi word used for Saturn Sayyaara: Also known as Sayyareh, the Farsi word for Planet or Planets
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25/M/Tabriz, Iran
Apr 14
Apr 14, 2026 at 7:30 PM UTC
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