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At first I was nothing, vast without contrast. But then I passed all that… I became a dot, And thought the whole universe was mine Until a line appeared! And as that line neared me, I feared the end of my existence. But with persistence, this line convinced me to come along… So I joined, I now had momentum. You couldn’t stop me I was all I could be! But up ahead, another line appeared and I feared a collision would leave me dead so I veered left. And became a right angle, tangled in a web of myself and my wealth and my worth. I’d turned inward once, so I thought, why not once more? And as I did this I realized I was traveling parallel to myself, back toward the beginning of my existence.That dot I thought I once was! Suddenly I stopped because far off to my left I saw a door I hadn’t seen before. So I turned inward once more toward that door, My new destination! And when I arrived at that door I realized that I was not a dot, or a line, or an angle. I was a square! I was a shape, give me a cape and I could be a character. I thought, it doesn’t get any better than this! This must be bliss this must be… Awkwardly, I heard a knock, knock knock. So I opened that door, expecting to find someone behind it knocking. Only all I found was another line descending downward. So I followed that line into a blinding white space, which I assumed was hollow. Due to the echo when I yelled “Hello”… Hello… Hello… “Is anyone there?”… Is anyone there?… Is anyone there?… Unaware of my surrounding the line abruptly became a point which diverged perpendicular in two directions. I became confused as to how one became two? Still, I moved onward. But then, when two became four I could no longer ignore the possibility that I was probably more than the four corners of this square, And when four corners became six sides, eight points and twelve lines I realized that I had depth! I was not just a dot, or a line, or a square… I was a cube! I had three dimensions dude! And I thought, it doesn’t get any better than this. This must be bliss this must be… Then I heard laughter and a voice told me to unfold myself, and I said what? And again, quite clearly, a voice told me to unfold myself. So I listened, and as I did this I realized I was not a dot, or a line, or a square, or a cube… I was a thought, unfolded into a cross, accosted by love that seemingly had nowhere else to go. And I thought, it doesn’t get any better than this. This must be bliss this must be… And again I heard someone laughing And a familiar voice asked me, “Do you think this is it my friend? Do you think it ends here? Don’t you know, it keeps going!”
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Apr 29, 2016
Apr 29, 2016 at 11:37 PM UTC
Dot
At first I was nothing, vast without contrast. But then I passed all that… I became a dot, And thought the whole universe was mine Until a line appeared! And as that line neared me, I feared the end of my existence. But with persistence, this line convinced me to come along… So I joined, I now had momentum. You couldn’t stop me I was all I could be! But up ahead, another line appeared and I feared a collision would leave me dead so I veered left. And became a right angle, tangled in a web of myself and my wealth and my worth. I’d turned inward once, so I thought, why not once more? And as I did this I realized I was traveling parallel to myself, back toward the beginning of my existence.That dot I thought I once was! Suddenly I stopped because far off to my left I saw a door I hadn’t seen before. So I turned inward once more toward that door, My new destination! And when I arrived at that door I realized that I was not a dot, or a line, or an angle. I was a square! I was a shape, give me a cape and I could be a character. I thought, it doesn’t get any better than this! This must be bliss this must be… Awkwardly, I heard a knock, knock knock. So I opened that door, expecting to find someone behind it knocking. Only all I found was another line descending downward. So I followed that line into a blinding white space, which I assumed was hollow. Due to the echo when I yelled “Hello”… Hello… Hello… “Is anyone there?”… Is anyone there?… Is anyone there?… Unaware of my surrounding the line abruptly became a point which diverged perpendicular in two directions. I became confused as to how one became two? Still, I moved onward. But then, when two became four I could no longer ignore the possibility that I was probably more than the four corners of this square, And when four corners became six sides, eight points and twelve lines I realized that I had depth! I was not just a dot, or a line, or a square… I was a cube! I had three dimensions dude! And I thought, it doesn’t get any better than this. This must be bliss this must be… Then I heard laughter and a voice told me to unfold myself, and I said what? And again, quite clearly, a voice told me to unfold myself. So I listened, and as I did this I realized I was not a dot, or a line, or a square, or a cube… I was a thought, unfolded into a cross, accosted by love that seemingly had nowhere else to go. And I thought, it doesn’t get any better than this. This must be bliss this must be… And again I heard someone laughing And a familiar voice asked me, “Do you think this is it my friend? Do you think it ends here? Don’t you know, it keeps going!”
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Apr 29, 2016
Apr 29, 2016 at 11:37 PM UTC
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