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Mountain deterioration Molehill sized problem In view of others eyes, Then why is it that mine A mountain do divine? Insistent drowning thoughts Craving dreaded loneliness For alone there is no hate, But too much time to contemplate. A crowd of people Yet to understand, Their molehill can be climbed My mountain is alive! It grows and walks away A steady pace I cannot match, I chip away with building hate Willing it to deteriorate. If I can conquer this mountain And start afresh anew, Then this depression ruling high Will be expelled with no forlorn goodbye. But no. My problems seem too large. And that mountain in my mind, I can never leave behind. It stays, It looms, Depression booms. My mountain will not deteriorate.
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May 2, 2014
May 2, 2014 at 9:23 AM UTC
Mountain Deterioration - A poem on Depression
Mountain deterioration Molehill sized problem In view of others eyes, Then why is it that mine A mountain do divine? Insistent drowning thoughts Craving dreaded loneliness For alone there is no hate, But too much time to contemplate. A crowd of people Yet to understand, Their molehill can be climbed My mountain is alive! It grows and walks away A steady pace I cannot match, I chip away with building hate Willing it to deteriorate. If I can conquer this mountain And start afresh anew, Then this depression ruling high Will be expelled with no forlorn goodbye. But no. My problems seem too large. And that mountain in my mind, I can never leave behind. It stays, It looms, Depression booms. My mountain will not deteriorate.
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May 2, 2014
May 2, 2014 at 9:23 AM UTC
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