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Janice was quite excited when I saw her by Bath Terrace (we'd agreed to meet there ) Gran said you can come with us to see Quo Vadis Janice said who's Quo vadis? I asked o Benny she said it's a film it's about early Christianity it's got Robert Taylor and Deborah Kerr in it sounds good I said when is it and where? not sure but Gran said she'll ask your mum and well we'll actually go Janice said good I said (her gran whom she lived with was very protective and strict) so what shall we do today? I asked Janice smiled and said I told Gran we'd not go too far as she does worry although she doesn't worry as much if I'm with you what about East Street Market? I asked is it far? she asked not far if we get a bus I said she searched the pockets of her dress I've only got 6d she said is that enough? sure it is I said ok she said so we walked to the bus stop and got a bus that went to the market and sat next to each other and I paid the conductor and when we got there we went down the market street looking at the various stalls and I showed her the stall where I'd bought a fish tank a few months before what did you buy a fish tank for? she asked to put a gold fish in I won at the fairground on the bomb site in Meadow Row I told her was it any good? she asked no it leaked and the water came out but my uncle mended it with putty stuff and the water stays in now I said and is the fish happy there? she asked no it disappeared down the sink in the kitchen when I was cleaning it out last week o no poor gold fish where'd it go?   Janice asked my mum said it went to the River Thames then out to sea again I said o I see she said smiling that's was lucky I smiled yes I guess it was we walked around the stalls then we went to a small cafe and bought lemonade and two cakes (I had money left over from my pocket money) and we sat and ate them and a man said to Janice I like your red beret she was shy but said o thank you but I gave the man my John Wayne stare but he walked off and didn't seem to care.
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Jul 28, 2015
Jul 28, 2015 at 2:53 AM UTC
GOING TO MARKET 1956
Janice was quite excited when I saw her by Bath Terrace (we'd agreed to meet there ) Gran said you can come with us to see Quo Vadis Janice said who's Quo vadis? I asked o Benny she said it's a film it's about early Christianity it's got Robert Taylor and Deborah Kerr in it sounds good I said when is it and where? not sure but Gran said she'll ask your mum and well we'll actually go Janice said good I said (her gran whom she lived with was very protective and strict) so what shall we do today? I asked Janice smiled and said I told Gran we'd not go too far as she does worry although she doesn't worry as much if I'm with you what about East Street Market? I asked is it far? she asked not far if we get a bus I said she searched the pockets of her dress I've only got 6d she said is that enough? sure it is I said ok she said so we walked to the bus stop and got a bus that went to the market and sat next to each other and I paid the conductor and when we got there we went down the market street looking at the various stalls and I showed her the stall where I'd bought a fish tank a few months before what did you buy a fish tank for? she asked to put a gold fish in I won at the fairground on the bomb site in Meadow Row I told her was it any good? she asked no it leaked and the water came out but my uncle mended it with putty stuff and the water stays in now I said and is the fish happy there? she asked no it disappeared down the sink in the kitchen when I was cleaning it out last week o no poor gold fish where'd it go?   Janice asked my mum said it went to the River Thames then out to sea again I said o I see she said smiling that's was lucky I smiled yes I guess it was we walked around the stalls then we went to a small cafe and bought lemonade and two cakes (I had money left over from my pocket money) and we sat and ate them and a man said to Janice I like your red beret she was shy but said o thank you but I gave the man my John Wayne stare but he walked off and didn't seem to care.
A BOY AND GIRL IN LONDON IN 1956 GO TO EAST STREET MARKET
TerryCollett
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Jul 28, 2015
Jul 28, 2015 at 2:53 AM UTC
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