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When I was young My old Dad said Keep thinking on your feet. Don’t lose your head And fall in love With the first cutie you meet. I always tried To pay good mind To what my Dad always said. To let his words Find a proper place In the good part of my head. But Dad never told Of seductive types Who were after your paycheck. They can smile at you And then turn your life Into an emotional shipwreck. They act shy at first Butter wouldn’t melt But wait until a few dates later. They finagle and flirt And then do you dirt; Make you ready for your creator. I learned to slow down And ask many things To learn what she is all about. Now I don’t find myself Laid out on my floor Gasping like a dryland trout. Daddy was correct When he advised me To move slow and be wary. There have been many Of comely young lassies I am very glad I didn’t marry.
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Sep 8, 2015
Sep 8, 2015 at 7:44 PM UTC
FATHERLY ADVICE
When I was young My old Dad said Keep thinking on your feet. Don’t lose your head And fall in love With the first cutie you meet. I always tried To pay good mind To what my Dad always said. To let his words Find a proper place In the good part of my head. But Dad never told Of seductive types Who were after your paycheck. They can smile at you And then turn your life Into an emotional shipwreck. They act shy at first Butter wouldn’t melt But wait until a few dates later. They finagle and flirt And then do you dirt; Make you ready for your creator. I learned to slow down And ask many things To learn what she is all about. Now I don’t find myself Laid out on my floor Gasping like a dryland trout. Daddy was correct When he advised me To move slow and be wary. There have been many Of comely young lassies I am very glad I didn’t marry.
brent-kincaid
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Sep 8, 2015
Sep 8, 2015 at 7:44 PM UTC
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