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I used to look up to you. In awe of your actions, in what you do. Used to be happy with us around. Your hate was nowhere to be found. I wanted to be like you. A superhero uncle, that’s what I knew. But something wasn’t right. While I grew, you’re in a lot of fights. You drank a lot and had no job. The missed opportunities you let others grab. You’re full of flaws. Where was this superhero? He looks lost. Your life’s still a mess. Whole life’s a mishap, old and stressed. The hero I look up to is human. Full of flaws, does he do what he can? I grew up idolizing you. Now I’m old enough to be grateful I didn’t become you.
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Jul 8, 2021
Jul 8, 2021 at 4:04 AM UTC
Jon’s Flawed. God Damme.
I used to look up to you. In awe of your actions, in what you do. Used to be happy with us around. Your hate was nowhere to be found. I wanted to be like you. A superhero uncle, that’s what I knew. But something wasn’t right. While I grew, you’re in a lot of fights. You drank a lot and had no job. The missed opportunities you let others grab. You’re full of flaws. Where was this superhero? He looks lost. Your life’s still a mess. Whole life’s a mishap, old and stressed. The hero I look up to is human. Full of flaws, does he do what he can? I grew up idolizing you. Now I’m old enough to be grateful I didn’t become you.
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Jul 8, 2021
Jul 8, 2021 at 4:04 AM UTC
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