maybe if you loved me
i could finally rest my head
on a white pillow

Poeticdisaster

Mascara

This says an awful lot in 15 words.  Awesome.

Oh I feel you love, please however remember that you are wonderful. Lots of love. <3

This made me want to cry... 10/10 very good.

Very short nevertheless affective.lovely.

The way you tied that all together was pretty impressive!

Excellent.  The image is strong and the message impacts. Thanks

This has such an image in such a short pithy verse. That gives it impact. The title and the white pillow mix well into this grey subject.