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White vignette dream Someone came to me They asked if they could have my child And I said yes We talked for a while a smoked a few cigarettes It all felt so real, and different still yet I couldn't understand what was going on Why I was giving up my child Why I thought she would be better off But the deal was struck We went to the hallway where she was waiting to leave With her blue owl backpack, and I couldn't believe What was going on She started walking towards me crying And it all moved so fast She said "Bye" in the sweet, shy, shaky, and child like way she does And I broke down I wept on the floor And I wish I could rember what that sounded like Because that would be the most captured performance of pain
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Mar 3, 2016
Mar 3, 2016 at 12:51 AM UTC
White Vignette Dream
White vignette dream Someone came to me They asked if they could have my child And I said yes We talked for a while a smoked a few cigarettes It all felt so real, and different still yet I couldn't understand what was going on Why I was giving up my child Why I thought she would be better off But the deal was struck We went to the hallway where she was waiting to leave With her blue owl backpack, and I couldn't believe What was going on She started walking towards me crying And it all moved so fast She said "Bye" in the sweet, shy, shaky, and child like way she does And I broke down I wept on the floor And I wish I could rember what that sounded like Because that would be the most captured performance of pain
This didn't happen, but **** that dream was intense
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Mar 3, 2016
Mar 3, 2016 at 12:51 AM UTC
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