Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
They say that you should never Push a loyal person Past the point where they don't care. Clearly you never heard that. Or maybe you just don't care. Either way, you've made a large mistake. Because now all the anger That I've been saving all these years, All the fury I've been hiding- Finally has release. Every single person That's ever done me wrong, Every last wrong doing That I have withstood, Now falls upon your shoulders Along with what you've done, As if your own actions Weren't bad enough alone. They say that you should never Push a loyal person Past the point where they don't care. But maybe now you've guessed That it's far too late for you. Because I'll smile and I'll laugh I'll be pleasant around you. You'll think that all is fine, You'll fall into false comfort, And when you try your games again You'll fall flat upon your face.
0
Apr 20, 2014
Apr 20, 2014 at 6:04 PM UTC
Push a Loyal Person
They say that you should never Push a loyal person Past the point where they don't care. Clearly you never heard that. Or maybe you just don't care. Either way, you've made a large mistake. Because now all the anger That I've been saving all these years, All the fury I've been hiding- Finally has release. Every single person That's ever done me wrong, Every last wrong doing That I have withstood, Now falls upon your shoulders Along with what you've done, As if your own actions Weren't bad enough alone. They say that you should never Push a loyal person Past the point where they don't care. But maybe now you've guessed That it's far too late for you. Because I'll smile and I'll laugh I'll be pleasant around you. You'll think that all is fine, You'll fall into false comfort, And when you try your games again You'll fall flat upon your face.
Inspired by a quote I saw on the internet: "Never push a loyal person to the point where they no longer care." -Unknown
brynn-louise
Written by
Apr 20, 2014
Apr 20, 2014 at 6:04 PM UTC
Request permission to use this poem