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He called me, “Assassin,” And peered into my piercing blues.                      I called him “Collateral damage,”                      And watched my mark maunder blindly out the door.
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Aug 12, 2019
Aug 12, 2019 at 11:19 PM UTC
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He called me, “Assassin,” And peered into my piercing blues.                      I called him “Collateral damage,”                      And watched my mark maunder blindly out the door.
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Aug 12, 2019
Aug 12, 2019 at 11:19 PM UTC
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