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my dream house you see my dream house is just by lake burley griffin and as you walk in there is a coke machine at the top of a big escalator, and at the bottom of that escalator there are two doors, 1 door is the offices where people work and on the other side there is my front door and i know it sounds like every young persons fantasy, but as you enter, it was like, well the first thing you see is the hat rack in front of the first door to the gymnasium which had a treadmill and a rower and a bike and as you walk further you enter the lounge room where there is a nice comfy corner lounge and a LED TV and a big stereo where you can listen to your favourite music and as you walk further, there is an internet station where the computer is an apple with iPads and iPhones and the internet server was iinet wireless broadband, and as you walk further on, you see the kitchen where they had a built in dishwasher and stove and fridge, and it had all the latest kitchen gadgets that money can buy, yeah that sounds so cool and it has built in hot and cold water jets as well as normal tap water, and as you walk further you see the bathroom with a shower sink and toilet with a clean air contraption, to get rid of oopsy smells, and the bedroom was right near the other side window looking over the wonderful startrack oval but i can’t see in because of the grandstands around it, and there was a walk in wardrobe which rarely got messy, and i had round the clock help with cleaning and cooking, yeah this is absolute paradise, but it will always remain just a dream house
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Mar 28, 2016
Mar 28, 2016 at 5:52 AM UTC
a dream house which will make people happy
my dream house you see my dream house is just by lake burley griffin and as you walk in there is a coke machine at the top of a big escalator, and at the bottom of that escalator there are two doors, 1 door is the offices where people work and on the other side there is my front door and i know it sounds like every young persons fantasy, but as you enter, it was like, well the first thing you see is the hat rack in front of the first door to the gymnasium which had a treadmill and a rower and a bike and as you walk further you enter the lounge room where there is a nice comfy corner lounge and a LED TV and a big stereo where you can listen to your favourite music and as you walk further, there is an internet station where the computer is an apple with iPads and iPhones and the internet server was iinet wireless broadband, and as you walk further on, you see the kitchen where they had a built in dishwasher and stove and fridge, and it had all the latest kitchen gadgets that money can buy, yeah that sounds so cool and it has built in hot and cold water jets as well as normal tap water, and as you walk further you see the bathroom with a shower sink and toilet with a clean air contraption, to get rid of oopsy smells, and the bedroom was right near the other side window looking over the wonderful startrack oval but i can’t see in because of the grandstands around it, and there was a walk in wardrobe which rarely got messy, and i had round the clock help with cleaning and cooking, yeah this is absolute paradise, but it will always remain just a dream house
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Mar 28, 2016
Mar 28, 2016 at 5:52 AM UTC
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