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When you first start dating All the imperfections and pet peeves Fly right out the proverbial window You don't notice the way they Chew with their mouth open or Leave their tooth brushes by the sink You don't notice how bad their oral hygiene is And you convince yourself the Loud snores they make while you Lay wide awake are endearing What you really don't notice is How short tempered they can be And how they can snap at you for simply Pointing out the clothes on the floor Or how they don't communicate Their problems well How they are flighty and accidentally Interrupt conversations And you certainly don't notice how Unknowingly demeaning they can be Towards you at times How they can make you feel insignificant and Minuscule when they never meant to But now I am seeing all these imperfections Flaws found like a scratch lottery ticket Each day scrapes off something new for Me to win Like the way they leave the tooth paste On the counter Or leave the gas on empty for me to fill And each new day brings to light My own imperfections The way my room is a mess till midnight When I go through a mania period Or that I whisper during movies Letting slip what I think the possible Endings could be That I can hold a grudge like no other How do relationships function With all these imperfections? Why would you deal with someone Who is so imperfect? That’s the thing though You aren’t “dealing” with that person And if in some way you are then You shouldn’t be in a relationship You do not deal with love You accept love Talk to love Try to help love Your end goal is not to change and Morph love into something Unrecognizable No, your end goal is to Grow together and talk things out To never stop growing together To be there for each other And to be honest with love Not to hide how you feel about The constant chaos of the clothes And the toothpaste leaking out of the tube Do not hide from love Or you will lose it
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Jan 8, 2015
Jan 8, 2015 at 12:35 PM UTC
When You First Start Dating (Edited)
When you first start dating All the imperfections and pet peeves Fly right out the proverbial window You don't notice the way they Chew with their mouth open or Leave their tooth brushes by the sink You don't notice how bad their oral hygiene is And you convince yourself the Loud snores they make while you Lay wide awake are endearing What you really don't notice is How short tempered they can be And how they can snap at you for simply Pointing out the clothes on the floor Or how they don't communicate Their problems well How they are flighty and accidentally Interrupt conversations And you certainly don't notice how Unknowingly demeaning they can be Towards you at times How they can make you feel insignificant and Minuscule when they never meant to But now I am seeing all these imperfections Flaws found like a scratch lottery ticket Each day scrapes off something new for Me to win Like the way they leave the tooth paste On the counter Or leave the gas on empty for me to fill And each new day brings to light My own imperfections The way my room is a mess till midnight When I go through a mania period Or that I whisper during movies Letting slip what I think the possible Endings could be That I can hold a grudge like no other How do relationships function With all these imperfections? Why would you deal with someone Who is so imperfect? That’s the thing though You aren’t “dealing” with that person And if in some way you are then You shouldn’t be in a relationship You do not deal with love You accept love Talk to love Try to help love Your end goal is not to change and Morph love into something Unrecognizable No, your end goal is to Grow together and talk things out To never stop growing together To be there for each other And to be honest with love Not to hide how you feel about The constant chaos of the clothes And the toothpaste leaking out of the tube Do not hide from love Or you will lose it
ellyn-k-thaiden
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Jan 8, 2015
Jan 8, 2015 at 12:35 PM UTC
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