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Should I stop writing? Should I start living? Would this pain past? or for eternity it will last? Should I wait till dusk? or should I go now? Will I ever see the dawn? Will I ever feel light's caress again? Am I struggling with the inevitable? Should I let go and lose hope? Yet here I sit, in the passenger's seat. Waiting patiently, hoping she still will love me; till the day after forever. The shattered pieces I amass, to patch myself up. Give the world a grin, amidst the pain within. LIFE GOES ON                                                                                            .
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Jul 3, 2014
Jul 3, 2014 at 12:17 PM UTC
Jeepney. (Ventilated Poetry; p.4)
Should I stop writing? Should I start living? Would this pain past? or for eternity it will last? Should I wait till dusk? or should I go now? Will I ever see the dawn? Will I ever feel light's caress again? Am I struggling with the inevitable? Should I let go and lose hope? Yet here I sit, in the passenger's seat. Waiting patiently, hoping she still will love me; till the day after forever. The shattered pieces I amass, to patch myself up. Give the world a grin, amidst the pain within. LIFE GOES ON                                                                                            .
I was on the way to school this morning when I got the urge to write something. The title "Jeepney" is after the Philippine's most renowned transportation means. I was after all, writing the poem while I was riding a jeep to school. State of Despair.
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Jul 3, 2014
Jul 3, 2014 at 12:17 PM UTC
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