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i should have known from the moment i saw you and the time when you left to my present diseased state now should have saw the signs and noticed the symptoms: my chest constricts whenever you're around my lungs swiftly assaulted leaving me gasping as if i just swallowed an entire ocean of saltwater like asthma, you took my breath away at first, it led me to a good place akin to a whirlwind floral maze now that you're gone i thought i would recover but then, as with asthma, there is no cure for me i realized with a shudder the painful tattoos were burnt into my heart and there they will remain forever
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Dec 14, 2013
Dec 14, 2013 at 11:20 AM UTC
asthma.
i should have known from the moment i saw you and the time when you left to my present diseased state now should have saw the signs and noticed the symptoms: my chest constricts whenever you're around my lungs swiftly assaulted leaving me gasping as if i just swallowed an entire ocean of saltwater like asthma, you took my breath away at first, it led me to a good place akin to a whirlwind floral maze now that you're gone i thought i would recover but then, as with asthma, there is no cure for me i realized with a shudder the painful tattoos were burnt into my heart and there they will remain forever
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Dec 14, 2013
Dec 14, 2013 at 11:20 AM UTC
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