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Sitting in the silence of my car No moving, Nor rushing, Nor having places to be I feel finally free In the parking lot of PetCo I read poems I ponder as people slip and slide Into stores and cars and out of my life They’re all rushing, Full of movement, Machines of motion and muscle But in this moment the weight of their problems have lifted off my shoulders I leave my body and lustfully linger in the stale air of solitude I’ve grown to admire Trapped in its own world As the passing are in theirs I am the big open air And the air behind doors Of cars and of stores Trapped or chosen Inhaled and Ex A calm culmination of momentary peace
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May 2, 2022
May 2, 2022 at 2:40 PM UTC
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Sitting in the silence of my car No moving, Nor rushing, Nor having places to be I feel finally free In the parking lot of PetCo I read poems I ponder as people slip and slide Into stores and cars and out of my life They’re all rushing, Full of movement, Machines of motion and muscle But in this moment the weight of their problems have lifted off my shoulders I leave my body and lustfully linger in the stale air of solitude I’ve grown to admire Trapped in its own world As the passing are in theirs I am the big open air And the air behind doors Of cars and of stores Trapped or chosen Inhaled and Ex A calm culmination of momentary peace
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17/M/Rhode Island
May 2, 2022
May 2, 2022 at 2:40 PM UTC
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