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That week was so hot, every shotgun house gasped, windows flung, screen doors striking wooden frames, the squawk of rusty springs. Touching skin felt like punishment at first, then penance, then prayer. We were thin, androgynous, switching cut-off jeans, sharing tank tops, slick with sweat and shaved ice. Strays ourselves, barefoot thieves, pirates of the quarter. Hibiscus syrup stained our mouths outside the Prytania, where The Abyss flickered and you cried like a boy pretending he didn’t. Inside your walk-up, we dipped into quiet love like bread in stew. The radio’s crackle carried The Ink Spots, which I recognized but couldn’t name. You mouthed every note like a secret you wanted me to guess. Faint smiling lines near your eyes from knowing, like you’d seen me long before we met. Not woman, not man, just two bodies leaning toward the same heat. I wouldn't see your fall or your winter. When the seasons change, I’ll be gone, back home, watching rain from a train window, each drop undoing what we were. That last night, you placed your key by the door. I saw it, watched it glint, and said nothing. The snails were climbing. The air was too sweet. You slept through goodbye. I left the key where it lay.
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Jul 21, 2025
Jul 21, 2025 at 3:16 PM UTC
New Orleans, Late Century
That week was so hot, every shotgun house gasped, windows flung, screen doors striking wooden frames, the squawk of rusty springs. Touching skin felt like punishment at first, then penance, then prayer. We were thin, androgynous, switching cut-off jeans, sharing tank tops, slick with sweat and shaved ice. Strays ourselves, barefoot thieves, pirates of the quarter. Hibiscus syrup stained our mouths outside the Prytania, where The Abyss flickered and you cried like a boy pretending he didn’t. Inside your walk-up, we dipped into quiet love like bread in stew. The radio’s crackle carried The Ink Spots, which I recognized but couldn’t name. You mouthed every note like a secret you wanted me to guess. Faint smiling lines near your eyes from knowing, like you’d seen me long before we met. Not woman, not man, just two bodies leaning toward the same heat. I wouldn't see your fall or your winter. When the seasons change, I’ll be gone, back home, watching rain from a train window, each drop undoing what we were. That last night, you placed your key by the door. I saw it, watched it glint, and said nothing. The snails were climbing. The air was too sweet. You slept through goodbye. I left the key where it lay.
William-A-Gibson
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M/Cambria CA
Jul 21, 2025
Jul 21, 2025 at 3:16 PM UTC
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