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'pup' is sad and so says i point out a 'v' of exit geese against the sky says he's not sad anymore and he's not a child's power  just like that
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Sep 26, 2024
Sep 26, 2024 at 6:57 PM UTC
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'pup' is sad and so says i point out a 'v' of exit geese against the sky says he's not sad anymore and he's not a child's power  just like that
observation of my five yr old child 09/24 early haiku style versions - 1. viewing the exit migration of a v of geese my child's sad mood goes 2. exit migration   of an echelon of geese my child's sad mood lifts
#autumn#brevity#fall#short#children#geese#migration#moods#sad#happy
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Sep 26, 2024
Sep 26, 2024 at 6:57 PM UTC
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