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Pretentiousness drenches us like an insecure rain Hiding our lack of intelligence, our dull wit, our bland ordinariness That suggests we're nothing but grain In a bronze field of millions of other strands, the same. That try so hard to understand, but do not retain. Moving back and forth in the wind from another field Better than us, but we arrogantly refuse to see, let alone yield. Reading Ulysses, Dylan Thomas, Catcher in the Rye Used to be different and genius, but everyone made it so dry With their 'brilliant' interpretations, or contrived relation Claiming themselves as the people the pages always cried. They degraded works that used to give those genuine elation. There is nothing as sad as watching words disintegrate into a lie. And there's nothing as disgusting than those who swallow the ink Regurgitating the letters into what they try to believe is their natural drink
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Mar 4, 2014
Mar 4, 2014 at 7:15 PM UTC
Pretentious Vol. 1
Pretentiousness drenches us like an insecure rain Hiding our lack of intelligence, our dull wit, our bland ordinariness That suggests we're nothing but grain In a bronze field of millions of other strands, the same. That try so hard to understand, but do not retain. Moving back and forth in the wind from another field Better than us, but we arrogantly refuse to see, let alone yield. Reading Ulysses, Dylan Thomas, Catcher in the Rye Used to be different and genius, but everyone made it so dry With their 'brilliant' interpretations, or contrived relation Claiming themselves as the people the pages always cried. They degraded works that used to give those genuine elation. There is nothing as sad as watching words disintegrate into a lie. And there's nothing as disgusting than those who swallow the ink Regurgitating the letters into what they try to believe is their natural drink
joshua-haines
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26/M/American
Mar 4, 2014
Mar 4, 2014 at 7:15 PM UTC
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