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It's strange to me to write one word at a time on each line. Who speaks like that? Poetry, I think, should be a conversation between you and your soul. Your soul may not understand unnecessary intermittent pauses. Well. I don't understand unnecessary intermittent pauses. Case in point: Writing this was difficult. (It's probably a literary weakness.) I imagine that a soul would speak in at least partial sentences without such halting spasmodic twitches. Unless it doesn't. I am not your soul. If you find wholeness and depth and truth by writing this way, then carry on. ******* (There's the rhyme. There's always a place and a time for convention.)
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Jul 19, 2014
Jul 19, 2014 at 7:19 PM UTC
I am unfamiliar with poetry.
It's strange to me to write one word at a time on each line. Who speaks like that? Poetry, I think, should be a conversation between you and your soul. Your soul may not understand unnecessary intermittent pauses. Well. I don't understand unnecessary intermittent pauses. Case in point: Writing this was difficult. (It's probably a literary weakness.) I imagine that a soul would speak in at least partial sentences without such halting spasmodic twitches. Unless it doesn't. I am not your soul. If you find wholeness and depth and truth by writing this way, then carry on. ******* (There's the rhyme. There's always a place and a time for convention.)
Directed at no one particularly. Just an observation.
elizabeth-kelly
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Jul 19, 2014
Jul 19, 2014 at 7:19 PM UTC
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