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At the break of dawn, When tempests and tides subside; I will remain here. Bask in sunrise, awaiting; Elusive silver lining.
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Aug 13, 2017
Aug 13, 2017 at 11:33 PM UTC
Silver Lining
At the break of dawn, When tempests and tides subside; I will remain here. Bask in sunrise, awaiting; Elusive silver lining.
My first attempt to write a tanka. Constructive criticisms are welcome. :)
#tanka#optimism#patience#star#sunrise#silverlining
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JorgePalileo
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Aug 13, 2017
Aug 13, 2017 at 11:33 PM UTC
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