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i sometimes wonder why does it feel like i am always a second version like someone was already here doing everything i do but better same steps same attempts same effort but somehow cleaner sharper louder why do i try and still feel like i am catching up to something i never started dance studies art sports everything becomes a quiet comparison even when no one says it and i am proud of them i mean it i am but it still sits there this feeling i don’t fully name because it is not jealousy not really it is something worse than that it is watching them shine and feeling happy for them while also wondering why that light never lands on me the same way and that is what makes it worse because how do you feel empty about something you are also proud of why does praise for them feel like distance for me why does my effort feel invisible even when it is the same kind of trying why do i feel like a reflection that never fully forms not less just always after and why does that turn into guilt like i am not allowed to feel this because i love them because i do but love does not cancel out the feeling of being unseen and that is what hurts not hatred not jealousy just this strange heaviness of being happy and lost in the same breath
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Apr 16
Apr 16, 2026 at 4:20 AM UTC
The pov of the younger sibling
i sometimes wonder why does it feel like i am always a second version like someone was already here doing everything i do but better same steps same attempts same effort but somehow cleaner sharper louder why do i try and still feel like i am catching up to something i never started dance studies art sports everything becomes a quiet comparison even when no one says it and i am proud of them i mean it i am but it still sits there this feeling i don’t fully name because it is not jealousy not really it is something worse than that it is watching them shine and feeling happy for them while also wondering why that light never lands on me the same way and that is what makes it worse because how do you feel empty about something you are also proud of why does praise for them feel like distance for me why does my effort feel invisible even when it is the same kind of trying why do i feel like a reflection that never fully forms not less just always after and why does that turn into guilt like i am not allowed to feel this because i love them because i do but love does not cancel out the feeling of being unseen and that is what hurts not hatred not jealousy just this strange heaviness of being happy and lost in the same breath
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Apr 16
Apr 16, 2026 at 4:20 AM UTC
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