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i sometimes wonder why does it feel like i am always a second version like someone was already here doing everything i do but better same steps same attempts same effort but somehow cleaner sharper louder why do i try and still feel like i am catching up to something i never started dance studies art sports everything becomes a quiet comparison even when no one says it and i am proud of them i mean it i am but it still sits there this feeling i don’t fully name because it is not jealousy not really it is something worse than that it is watching them shine and feeling happy for them while also wondering why that light never lands on me the same way and that is what makes it worse because how do you feel empty about something you are also proud of why does praise for them feel like distance for me why does my effort feel invisible even when it is the same kind of trying why do i feel like a reflection that never fully forms not less just always after and why does that turn into guilt like i am not allowed to feel this because i love them because i do but love does not cancel out the feeling of being unseen and that is what hurts not hatred not jealousy just this strange heaviness of being happy and lost in the same breath
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Apr 16
Apr 16, 2026 at 4:20 AM UTC
The pov of the younger sibling
why are they called white as if the color makes them clean as if a lie becomes lighter when it is said softly why does “i’m fine” feel like swallowing a truth that never dissolves why do we say things to protect someone else and then sit alone with what we didn’t say why does a small lie follow us longer than it should not in words but in feeling in the pause after in the way it repeats itself when everything is finally still why is it easier to bend the truth than risk being fully seen and why does that choice still leave a mark not on others on us we say it was nothing just a white lie but it stays heavier than it sounds because even when it protects it still takes something away
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Apr 16
Apr 16, 2026 at 4:16 AM UTC
White Lies
why does average feel like a word people lower their voice for like it’s something fragile or worse something embarrassing why does it sound like a life half-lived why do we say “don’t be average” the way we say “don’t waste yourself” as if they mean the same thing why does failure get remembered held up dissected given meaning while average slips through fingers without even leaving a trace why is being the worst still a kind of presence a mark a stain proof that you touched something but being average feels like standing in a room full of people and slowly realizing no one would notice if you left why does that thought sit heavier than the fear of falling apart why do we chase extremes like they’re proof of living as if pain or brilliance are the only languages that count why is quiet mistaken for empty why is steady mistaken for small why does “enough” sound like surrender who taught us that we must either overflow or disappear who decided the middle was a place people go when they stop trying because i look at it now and it doesn’t feel empty it feels full in a quieter way like a heartbeat you don’t notice until it stops like breath coming and going without asking to be seen maybe average is not the absence of something maybe it is the absence of breaking maybe it is staying when everything around you demands you to become louder bigger more maybe it is choosing to exist without turning yourself into a performance
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Mar 29
Mar 29, 2026 at 1:41 AM UTC
Why is average something I should apologize for?