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I just wanted you to know I never had any desire to take care of another living thing until you laid your head in my lap. I never got the chance to tell you I believed heaven to be the sound of your breathing as you fell asleep, so I told him instead. It wasn't quite the same, but I guess it was close enough.
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Jan 14, 2017
Jan 14, 2017 at 9:31 PM UTC
Close enough
I just wanted you to know I never had any desire to take care of another living thing until you laid your head in my lap. I never got the chance to tell you I believed heaven to be the sound of your breathing as you fell asleep, so I told him instead. It wasn't quite the same, but I guess it was close enough.
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Jan 14, 2017
Jan 14, 2017 at 9:31 PM UTC
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