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Cancelled For being too keen For saying I like you Too loudly It seems a shame But then... Maybe I was a little full on... Like maybe what was heard was "I need you!" Not "I like you" So maybe what i was actually saying was "Save me, From my lonliness!" "Complete me, Let me hang off your brilliance and raise me from my inadequacy" Which to be fair is kind of creepy And well not who I want to be anyway... So if I wasn't cancelled by someone for being like that... If that vibe floated their boat I'd probably have to cancel.them anyway. So the final score One all.
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Jan 21, 2023
Jan 21, 2023 at 7:38 AM UTC
Cancelled
Cancelled For being too keen For saying I like you Too loudly It seems a shame But then... Maybe I was a little full on... Like maybe what was heard was "I need you!" Not "I like you" So maybe what i was actually saying was "Save me, From my lonliness!" "Complete me, Let me hang off your brilliance and raise me from my inadequacy" Which to be fair is kind of creepy And well not who I want to be anyway... So if I wasn't cancelled by someone for being like that... If that vibe floated their boat I'd probably have to cancel.them anyway. So the final score One all.
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Jan 21, 2023
Jan 21, 2023 at 7:38 AM UTC
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