this music pleases me
it has the riffs
heavy bass and thundering drums
a singer whose voice
sounds like gravel and ice
but it doesn't excite me
there is plenty but not enough
there is emotion but stunted
there is noise but too controlled
I want them to hear them play
like no one is listening
Jun 22, 2025
Jun 22, 2025 at 6:07 AM UTC
this music pleases me
it has the riffs
heavy bass and thundering drums
a singer whose voice
sounds like gravel and ice
but it doesn't excite me
there is plenty but not enough
there is emotion but stunted
there is noise but too controlled
I want them to hear them play
like no one is listening
Black Metal and Death Metal come close!
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