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Looking up, seeing you again It makes me feel so tired. Here you are to ruin another day How can I ever be inspired? Now every time I see you makes me wish I was blind. Because you stimulate no peace of mind. You make me feel You make me feel You make me feel Like a ****** old woman! Years ago, you and I ran aground Wiping out on love's breakers I tried to fix things, tried to wake you up But all pleas fell on deaf ears. Sometimes a couple can turn into a joke Impossible to fix something so badly broke. You make me feel You make me feel You make me feel Like a ****** old woman!
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Jul 30, 2018
Jul 30, 2018 at 3:49 PM UTC
YOU MAKE ME FEEL...
Looking up, seeing you again It makes me feel so tired. Here you are to ruin another day How can I ever be inspired? Now every time I see you makes me wish I was blind. Because you stimulate no peace of mind. You make me feel You make me feel You make me feel Like a ****** old woman! Years ago, you and I ran aground Wiping out on love's breakers I tried to fix things, tried to wake you up But all pleas fell on deaf ears. Sometimes a couple can turn into a joke Impossible to fix something so badly broke. You make me feel You make me feel You make me feel Like a ****** old woman!
(With apologies to Carole King, Gerry Gofflin and Aretha Franklin)
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Jul 30, 2018
Jul 30, 2018 at 3:49 PM UTC
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