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thinking of either scrapping it or trying again. not too sure.. gonna try to change it up first and see how i go. because honestly? i think it deserves a second chance. the idea is there. before i change it; i dont know how to love and trust you after ive been hurt. not by you. but by someone who i loved and trusted. and i dont know how to do it again. after; i dont know how to love you or trust you after ive been hurt.. but i wasn't hurt by you. i was hurt by someone who i loved and trusted. and i dont know how to do it again after i was betrayed like that. so easily -- and they didn't look back. i just don't want to get hurt again. i don't think i could handle it. i still hate it. but i think im gonna just put it on myserie anyway because the idea is there and i think it's got a small chance. it's very difficult for me to explain how i feel. most of my poems take a few tries to fully get my whole point across, but this one i just can't seem to at all. so im gonna upload it, either way. because i think it'll help with my emotions.
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Sep 13, 2025
Sep 13, 2025 at 12:20 PM UTC
006 / part three
thinking of either scrapping it or trying again. not too sure.. gonna try to change it up first and see how i go. because honestly? i think it deserves a second chance. the idea is there. before i change it; i dont know how to love and trust you after ive been hurt. not by you. but by someone who i loved and trusted. and i dont know how to do it again. after; i dont know how to love you or trust you after ive been hurt.. but i wasn't hurt by you. i was hurt by someone who i loved and trusted. and i dont know how to do it again after i was betrayed like that. so easily -- and they didn't look back. i just don't want to get hurt again. i don't think i could handle it. i still hate it. but i think im gonna just put it on myserie anyway because the idea is there and i think it's got a small chance. it's very difficult for me to explain how i feel. most of my poems take a few tries to fully get my whole point across, but this one i just can't seem to at all. so im gonna upload it, either way. because i think it'll help with my emotions.
noumena
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Sep 13, 2025
Sep 13, 2025 at 12:20 PM UTC
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