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Low down in the dirt and silt, Buried hatchet, blade and hilt, Armor without sparkling gold, Body taken o'er by mold. 'Tis the flesh and blood of him, Ignatius, whose body dim. But mind so sharp it cut through tin, Forgotten now by all his kin. Forgotten by himself, as well, All't remains; the bronzen bell. That rang when beastly men he fell And sent nations to fiery hell: He died not as he lived before, Not on the fields of battle evermore; Killed, he was, by a simple thing: A mind destroyed by a ceaseless ring. And thus, all that remains are the corpses, The blood and gore, the slain forces. And a man who could not be destroyed, Lest it be by his own body. But we shant forget the legacy We shall compose a threnody For to forget is but heresy Remember our simple knight.
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Aug 14, 2021
Aug 14, 2021 at 9:21 AM UTC
Ignatius, the Ignoble
Low down in the dirt and silt, Buried hatchet, blade and hilt, Armor without sparkling gold, Body taken o'er by mold. 'Tis the flesh and blood of him, Ignatius, whose body dim. But mind so sharp it cut through tin, Forgotten now by all his kin. Forgotten by himself, as well, All't remains; the bronzen bell. That rang when beastly men he fell And sent nations to fiery hell: He died not as he lived before, Not on the fields of battle evermore; Killed, he was, by a simple thing: A mind destroyed by a ceaseless ring. And thus, all that remains are the corpses, The blood and gore, the slain forces. And a man who could not be destroyed, Lest it be by his own body. But we shant forget the legacy We shall compose a threnody For to forget is but heresy Remember our simple knight.
I wrote this, after weeks of thinking about it, in memory of one of my friends. He was one of the strongest people I knew, and a great friend, taken all too soon by cancer. Rest in peace. The last line's abruptness is on purpose, as I think it befits the way he left us.
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Aug 14, 2021
Aug 14, 2021 at 9:21 AM UTC
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