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Man: (to his reflection) Advise me! Tell me! Help me! Not sure what I'm doing to me Want out of this prison, help me Tremendous spiny walls held me Reflection: Responsible but not strict Positives in time are a hit Think of the negative as **** No charges, you're free to sit Man: Scars over my face Can't properly tie a lace Habit's becoming this craze Trying to fill in and embrace Reflection: The problems are virtual Complaints all perpetual Dear this is conceptual Happenings are all eventual Man: Close to your perspective But misery isn't elective All minds aren't receptive Not all efforts are effective
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Sep 24, 2017
Sep 24, 2017 at 9:48 PM UTC
"Human Reflection"
Man: (to his reflection) Advise me! Tell me! Help me! Not sure what I'm doing to me Want out of this prison, help me Tremendous spiny walls held me Reflection: Responsible but not strict Positives in time are a hit Think of the negative as **** No charges, you're free to sit Man: Scars over my face Can't properly tie a lace Habit's becoming this craze Trying to fill in and embrace Reflection: The problems are virtual Complaints all perpetual Dear this is conceptual Happenings are all eventual Man: Close to your perspective But misery isn't elective All minds aren't receptive Not all efforts are effective
FaisalAmin
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Sep 24, 2017
Sep 24, 2017 at 9:48 PM UTC
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