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blowing out candles with the same awe when i see them fade away though when i close my eyes my only wish was for them to stay but didnt i enjoy watching them go? even if the moment was nice, even if the light comforted me, i liked to watch the spark go but.. somewhere deep in me.. wished for the blaze to stay.
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Dec 20, 2025
Dec 20, 2025 at 10:26 AM UTC
birthday — still?
blowing out candles with the same awe when i see them fade away though when i close my eyes my only wish was for them to stay but didnt i enjoy watching them go? even if the moment was nice, even if the light comforted me, i liked to watch the spark go but.. somewhere deep in me.. wished for the blaze to stay.
rewrite of the poem i found on my notebook
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15/M/Brazil
Dec 20, 2025
Dec 20, 2025 at 10:26 AM UTC
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