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As you looked away You poured in too much It was unnoticeable at first You were unaware that you had changed everything For everyone It cooked differently It smelt differently And tasted differently Maybe if you weren't so careless And aware of your actions It would hurt less You've turned everything bitter But you could start over And make things work But instead you chuck it onto the heap Were it rots away with all the others That you gave up on
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Mar 30, 2014
Mar 30, 2014 at 2:35 PM UTC
Careless
As you looked away You poured in too much It was unnoticeable at first You were unaware that you had changed everything For everyone It cooked differently It smelt differently And tasted differently Maybe if you weren't so careless And aware of your actions It would hurt less You've turned everything bitter But you could start over And make things work But instead you chuck it onto the heap Were it rots away with all the others That you gave up on
You shouldn't have given up on her
Crashlandings
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Mar 30, 2014
Mar 30, 2014 at 2:35 PM UTC
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