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There was a village Called Ludnica in maps Quite old and vintage The population reached 100 at max It was known far and wide For it's weird rules Everyone had to abide And dress like white ghouls Half of them were blacksmiths Working day and night Others had to submit And were to be polite Every once in a while Another black sheep would appear Some even hostile Not understanding why they were there Then the blacksmiths' work would restart They chipped away the metal chains Reshaped the mind part by part Untill the sickness didn't remain "Where was this Ludnica?" You might ask But don't search for it Because it will find you at last
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Nov 12, 2020
Nov 12, 2020 at 5:40 AM UTC
Blacksmiths and black sheep
There was a village Called Ludnica in maps Quite old and vintage The population reached 100 at max It was known far and wide For it's weird rules Everyone had to abide And dress like white ghouls Half of them were blacksmiths Working day and night Others had to submit And were to be polite Every once in a while Another black sheep would appear Some even hostile Not understanding why they were there Then the blacksmiths' work would restart They chipped away the metal chains Reshaped the mind part by part Untill the sickness didn't remain "Where was this Ludnica?" You might ask But don't search for it Because it will find you at last
This might be easy to guess But I still wonder if this text makes sense
Eola
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Nov 12, 2020
Nov 12, 2020 at 5:40 AM UTC
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