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You look good (But you don't look great) How have I been keeping (I'm preoccupied) Caught up in lesser things (Feeling overwhelmed) Starting a whole new story (And you've stayed perfect) I'm sure that you've been well (And writing a whole new life) How are your mum and dad? (What about that brother?) Will you go back to England? (Will you go to Rome?) I know that you'll choose wisely (I hope you die alone) Will you make it home alright? (I want you to disappear) I'll hope to see you soon (Please won't you fade away?) So I guess this is bye (For the very last time) Have a brilliant night (And get out of my life) Goodbye (Goodbye.)
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May 20, 2014
May 20, 2014 at 3:27 AM UTC
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You look good (But you don't look great) How have I been keeping (I'm preoccupied) Caught up in lesser things (Feeling overwhelmed) Starting a whole new story (And you've stayed perfect) I'm sure that you've been well (And writing a whole new life) How are your mum and dad? (What about that brother?) Will you go back to England? (Will you go to Rome?) I know that you'll choose wisely (I hope you die alone) Will you make it home alright? (I want you to disappear) I'll hope to see you soon (Please won't you fade away?) So I guess this is bye (For the very last time) Have a brilliant night (And get out of my life) Goodbye (Goodbye.)
I wrote this while singing it. Does that make sense?
thefirstfall
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May 20, 2014
May 20, 2014 at 3:27 AM UTC
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