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he didn’t peel my orange, I let tears shed down my face, I’m not supposed to be sad, after all, it’s just an orange. a sweet and sour fruit, the color of a prison jumpsuit, I think I need a parachute, to rescue me into absolute. I don’t notice anything else, just the fact that he refused, but I stop to think and realise, that maybe I need to be defused. all these problems climbing up, rushing in from the slope, when a sweet turns to sour, and something snaps inside. Why am I filled with smoke, Why do I feel this way, Why am I so dependent, It’s just an orange anyway. so I start slowly, taking the skin off, piece by piece it falls, and it reveals something sweet. suddenly I understand. To peel someones orange, means I have to peel mine first.
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Jun 25, 2025
Jun 25, 2025 at 1:26 AM UTC
orange peel
he didn’t peel my orange, I let tears shed down my face, I’m not supposed to be sad, after all, it’s just an orange. a sweet and sour fruit, the color of a prison jumpsuit, I think I need a parachute, to rescue me into absolute. I don’t notice anything else, just the fact that he refused, but I stop to think and realise, that maybe I need to be defused. all these problems climbing up, rushing in from the slope, when a sweet turns to sour, and something snaps inside. Why am I filled with smoke, Why do I feel this way, Why am I so dependent, It’s just an orange anyway. so I start slowly, taking the skin off, piece by piece it falls, and it reveals something sweet. suddenly I understand. To peel someones orange, means I have to peel mine first.
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Jun 25, 2025
Jun 25, 2025 at 1:26 AM UTC
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