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Did you think of how your actions effected others, before you brought the blade down the 1st time? No                                                                                                                                                                   I bet you didn't think, of how much pain I felt when I found you on your bathroom floor You                                                                                                                                                                 probably thought that, dying was the easiest way out.But I Obviously                                                                                                                                                       was always there for you, and it hurts me more and more knowing that i was the closest to you and I Didn't                                                                                                                                                             notice a **** thing
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Nov 9, 2016
Nov 9, 2016 at 6:57 PM UTC
Did You Care?
Did you think of how your actions effected others, before you brought the blade down the 1st time? No                                                                                                                                                                   I bet you didn't think, of how much pain I felt when I found you on your bathroom floor You                                                                                                                                                                 probably thought that, dying was the easiest way out.But I Obviously                                                                                                                                                       was always there for you, and it hurts me more and more knowing that i was the closest to you and I Didn't                                                                                                                                                             notice a **** thing
To All Reader: I ask of you to give me you critiques on my poems. I want to become a better poet, and i need to know what i need to work on
Lord_Fuckwad
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Nov 9, 2016
Nov 9, 2016 at 6:57 PM UTC
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