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The spring in your steps And the spring in nature Playing a match That let me have a catch Of a bit of happiness In all my loneliness In all my loneliness This weather makes me Light as a feather Dreaming of us together Dreaming of us together In a fairyland We claim as ours Where a vast meadow Filled with flowers Dancing as the wind blows Dancing as the wind blows Taking away my woes Sun rays kissing our skin Let the light shine upon us
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Feb 9, 2015
Feb 9, 2015 at 1:53 AM UTC
Spring - A Collab with the Princess in Pink
The spring in your steps And the spring in nature Playing a match That let me have a catch Of a bit of happiness In all my loneliness In all my loneliness This weather makes me Light as a feather Dreaming of us together Dreaming of us together In a fairyland We claim as ours Where a vast meadow Filled with flowers Dancing as the wind blows Dancing as the wind blows Taking away my woes Sun rays kissing our skin Let the light shine upon us
After reading her poem about cherry blossoms and the brilliant imagery, I was awestruck. Today I got the opportunity to work with one of the gifted young poets of Hello Poetry, Blythe (I love her description, 'princess in pink'. An imaginative and fairytale look at the life). Unsurprisingly, she carried the spirit of one of my better poems in a brilliant way and lifted it a notch. I thank Her Royal Highness Blythe for this wonderful collaboration ;-) © GitacharYa VedaLa http://hellopoetry.com/gitacharya-vedala-1/ © blythe http://hellopoetry.com/blythe/
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Feb 9, 2015
Feb 9, 2015 at 1:53 AM UTC
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