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Link to just-published song (free): https://suno.com/s/PZvdfDCDcce18Gej Intro – Instrumental Verse 1 You gave me all your love Heart and mind and soul Nothing held back from the start And it overwhelmed my heart Verse 2 Your love was selfless, unconditional I saw not you, but fantasy You longed to build a quiet home I longed for us to fly, and be free Verse 3 You were a woman, I a boy Not in age, but maturity I heard you speak your truth to me Through tears I could not see Verse 4 I loved you more than life itself As much as I could give But not enough beyond myself To love as you loved me Chorus I loved you more than life But not more than myself I should have loved you more Or learned to let you go Verse 5 I heard you—but I didn’t see The pain beneath your words I should have listened with my heart Not only what I heard Verse 6 I would have died for you back then I'd die for you right now And yet I broke your quiet hope I just don’t know quite how Chorus I loved you more than life But not more than myself I should have loved you more Or learned to let you go Verse 7 I should have loved you more than me Or set your spirit free But I held on too blindly To what I wished to be Bridge – sparse, emotional, slower phrasing Verse 8 I planted love in fertile ground Mistook your tears for rain And what we grew was something wild That only brought us pain Verse 9 Our orchard stands in ruin now Overgrown with my neglect The fault is mine, the shame is mine And this I can’t correct Final Chorus – fuller, more intensity I loved you more than life But not more than myself I should have loved you more Or learned to let you go Verse 10 I’ll love you every day I breathe And after breath is gone But love alone could not repair The harm that I have done Outro – breathy, stripped down So we go on from day to day With tears we cannot hide And live within the quiet truth Of what we both let die Poem & Lyrics (C) Victor D. Lopez 2026. All rights reserved. The voice is cloned from the author's voice. The image was created using ChatGPT/Dall-E.
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May 21
May 21, 2026 at 1:49 PM UTC
I Loved You More Than Life - Poem, Lyrics & Link to New Song (free)
Link to just-published song (free): https://suno.com/s/PZvdfDCDcce18Gej Intro – Instrumental Verse 1 You gave me all your love Heart and mind and soul Nothing held back from the start And it overwhelmed my heart Verse 2 Your love was selfless, unconditional I saw not you, but fantasy You longed to build a quiet home I longed for us to fly, and be free Verse 3 You were a woman, I a boy Not in age, but maturity I heard you speak your truth to me Through tears I could not see Verse 4 I loved you more than life itself As much as I could give But not enough beyond myself To love as you loved me Chorus I loved you more than life But not more than myself I should have loved you more Or learned to let you go Verse 5 I heard you—but I didn’t see The pain beneath your words I should have listened with my heart Not only what I heard Verse 6 I would have died for you back then I'd die for you right now And yet I broke your quiet hope I just don’t know quite how Chorus I loved you more than life But not more than myself I should have loved you more Or learned to let you go Verse 7 I should have loved you more than me Or set your spirit free But I held on too blindly To what I wished to be Bridge – sparse, emotional, slower phrasing Verse 8 I planted love in fertile ground Mistook your tears for rain And what we grew was something wild That only brought us pain Verse 9 Our orchard stands in ruin now Overgrown with my neglect The fault is mine, the shame is mine And this I can’t correct Final Chorus – fuller, more intensity I loved you more than life But not more than myself I should have loved you more Or learned to let you go Verse 10 I’ll love you every day I breathe And after breath is gone But love alone could not repair The harm that I have done Outro – breathy, stripped down So we go on from day to day With tears we cannot hide And live within the quiet truth Of what we both let die Poem & Lyrics (C) Victor D. Lopez 2026. All rights reserved. The voice is cloned from the author's voice. The image was created using ChatGPT/Dall-E.
Poem & Lyrics (C) Victor D. Lopez 2026. All rights reserved. The voice is cloned from the author's voice.
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May 21
May 21, 2026 at 1:49 PM UTC
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