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Death, the here long after! Or do I mean the long here after? I don’t really know…what a strange thing death is. Consciousness is like a stream they say Never really believed them until now For my thoughts do run like a river (Styx?) Right through the valley where the shadow of Death walks That’s right…Death doesn’t ride. He ******* walks like the rest of us Blistered feet, soles of the dead can get blisters And they do! I’ve seen them! And at the bottom of their souls lies desire Desire for an answer, for purpose Never content even when an answer does find them, finds us We keep on looking Keep on walking We waste our lives as worrying wanderers Walking hand in hand with Death as we realize… We’re already dead
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Jul 16, 2015
Jul 16, 2015 at 3:41 PM UTC
Thanatophobia
Death, the here long after! Or do I mean the long here after? I don’t really know…what a strange thing death is. Consciousness is like a stream they say Never really believed them until now For my thoughts do run like a river (Styx?) Right through the valley where the shadow of Death walks That’s right…Death doesn’t ride. He ******* walks like the rest of us Blistered feet, soles of the dead can get blisters And they do! I’ve seen them! And at the bottom of their souls lies desire Desire for an answer, for purpose Never content even when an answer does find them, finds us We keep on looking Keep on walking We waste our lives as worrying wanderers Walking hand in hand with Death as we realize… We’re already dead
I write most of my poetry using the Stream of Consciousness technique. I start writing and whatever comes out comes out. The more I write, the more I realize I have a weird fixation on, and maybe even a fear of, death.
max-southwood
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Jul 16, 2015
Jul 16, 2015 at 3:41 PM UTC
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