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I cried upon my hawaiian departure not tears of sorrow but tears of former and future joy my tears trailed down my cheek like the Paheehee stream before landing upon the ground like a soft hawaiian rain in spring when my tears evaporated they formed a long flat cloud in the shape of surfboard voyaging westward bound. the cloud upon reaching the sea, shape-shifted into a large volcano, vengful and menacing with the torential downpour a sign of the volcanoe's erupting The storm began to thicken The volcano spinning around it's core like that of a fire dancers stick, scattering the tears evermore when the storm cleared eight tears washed upon each hawaiian shore wiating for me to surf upon my tears
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Feb 4, 2013
Feb 4, 2013 at 2:43 AM UTC
Surf upon my tears
I cried upon my hawaiian departure not tears of sorrow but tears of former and future joy my tears trailed down my cheek like the Paheehee stream before landing upon the ground like a soft hawaiian rain in spring when my tears evaporated they formed a long flat cloud in the shape of surfboard voyaging westward bound. the cloud upon reaching the sea, shape-shifted into a large volcano, vengful and menacing with the torential downpour a sign of the volcanoe's erupting The storm began to thicken The volcano spinning around it's core like that of a fire dancers stick, scattering the tears evermore when the storm cleared eight tears washed upon each hawaiian shore wiating for me to surf upon my tears
john-jordan
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Feb 4, 2013
Feb 4, 2013 at 2:43 AM UTC
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