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She turned off the mist It seemed In the morning hour Of a Californian day Where the beat of cars passing Outweighs that of the mechanical beauty industry Where dry cracked swimwear Rests on Los Angeles' golden sand And where the sun has ran away To somewhere a lot more sane And less powerful She had had enough So she collected her last tax refund And packed her case with paper bills and not much else Called on an old favour from an old friend Who drove her away To somewhere not far But far enough In Oakland The streets were unknown And she liked that idea Dragging herself through the day Without stopping to think Or admire the views she didn't care much for beauty Not to mention love And was happy enough to die alone   Which she did She left at seventy three Buried in a plain black coffin With no one to wish her goodbye Or well done for starting a life alone   Just herself Under the Californian brown earth Where the sun had begrudgingly returned
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Jul 10, 2014
Jul 10, 2014 at 4:51 PM UTC
In Oakland
She turned off the mist It seemed In the morning hour Of a Californian day Where the beat of cars passing Outweighs that of the mechanical beauty industry Where dry cracked swimwear Rests on Los Angeles' golden sand And where the sun has ran away To somewhere a lot more sane And less powerful She had had enough So she collected her last tax refund And packed her case with paper bills and not much else Called on an old favour from an old friend Who drove her away To somewhere not far But far enough In Oakland The streets were unknown And she liked that idea Dragging herself through the day Without stopping to think Or admire the views she didn't care much for beauty Not to mention love And was happy enough to die alone   Which she did She left at seventy three Buried in a plain black coffin With no one to wish her goodbye Or well done for starting a life alone   Just herself Under the Californian brown earth Where the sun had begrudgingly returned
Not sure how I feel about it. Just a thought about people.
A-Cosmo
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Jul 10, 2014
Jul 10, 2014 at 4:51 PM UTC
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