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Go where? Lydia's mother said Southend Lydia said you can't go to Southend on your own I'm not going on my own I'm going with Benny her mother stared at her Benny? Go with Benny? You're both too young to go to ****** Southend what put that thought into your mind? Her mother said we talked about it when we were at King's Cross station who is we? The mother said Benny and me Lydia said frowning ********* her fingers o so you talked it over o that's all right then is it? The mother said just to Southend as a first run then we want to go to Scotland Lydia said SCOTLAND her mother bellowed are you mad you two? You can't go to ****** Scotland at your age what 9 years old and want to go Scotland and alone? The mother stared at Lydia as if she was mad Lydia wished Benny was there he had a way with words he might be able to put it better whose idea was it? Both of us Lydia said we thought it would be good and we could go to Edinburgh and see men in kilts and see the castle NO NO NO the mother bellowed Lydia lowered her head and gazed at her mother's slippers you can't go to Scotland or Edinburgh or Southend not alone the mother said quieter staring at her daughter when can we go then? Lydia said looking at her mother's stockinged legs when you are old enough and we say so her mother said when will be old enough? Lydia said gazing at her mother's blue patterned apron when we say so her mother said and walked off back to the kitchen where the boiler was boiling washing and steam came down the passageway Lydia sighed and opened the front door and went out to find Benny and tell him the bad news and not being able to see the Edinburgh views.
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Jul 3, 2016
Jul 3, 2016 at 4:42 AM UTC
EDINBURGH VIEWS 1957
Go where? Lydia's mother said Southend Lydia said you can't go to Southend on your own I'm not going on my own I'm going with Benny her mother stared at her Benny? Go with Benny? You're both too young to go to ****** Southend what put that thought into your mind? Her mother said we talked about it when we were at King's Cross station who is we? The mother said Benny and me Lydia said frowning ********* her fingers o so you talked it over o that's all right then is it? The mother said just to Southend as a first run then we want to go to Scotland Lydia said SCOTLAND her mother bellowed are you mad you two? You can't go to ****** Scotland at your age what 9 years old and want to go Scotland and alone? The mother stared at Lydia as if she was mad Lydia wished Benny was there he had a way with words he might be able to put it better whose idea was it? Both of us Lydia said we thought it would be good and we could go to Edinburgh and see men in kilts and see the castle NO NO NO the mother bellowed Lydia lowered her head and gazed at her mother's slippers you can't go to Scotland or Edinburgh or Southend not alone the mother said quieter staring at her daughter when can we go then? Lydia said looking at her mother's stockinged legs when you are old enough and we say so her mother said when will be old enough? Lydia said gazing at her mother's blue patterned apron when we say so her mother said and walked off back to the kitchen where the boiler was boiling washing and steam came down the passageway Lydia sighed and opened the front door and went out to find Benny and tell him the bad news and not being able to see the Edinburgh views.
A GIRL AND HER MOTHER AND A TRIP TO SCOTLAND IN 1957
TerryCollett
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Jul 3, 2016
Jul 3, 2016 at 4:42 AM UTC
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