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Santiago set out to catch some fish, He sailed out further, then had his want And waited patiently with the prayer and wish With the remorseless lament. For awhile the boy, Malolin Joined this ole man, to learn fishing But the old man was, so dreary and weak Weak enough, to let go months resting. Manolin  was a a fair young kid, A kid of twelve or more Santiago was an old man, A man of eighty four! The boy got annoyed, And decided to leave Thinking the old man, Was disgruntled to perceive. But one fine day, when the sun smiled at this case The old man tried to set off his dismay He thought to go fishing & get his bait Like he did so happily, in his boyhood days! He set out, set again and caught some fish He sailed out further, and had his want. He saw a birdie, leading him to sea He caught more tuna,  and one bigger fish that fullfilled his want. He relished the tunas, the sea offered as  gift He loved how yummy, yummy it looked. But hardly noticed the deep line, the bigger fish had something big on it, that may further get him hooked. He used a small line, To snug a dolphin. That had in it two small fish They hid it it, Shining and smiling. He fought his need for sleep and fatigue, Of constantly keeping hold of line Before he saw the bigger  fish, Suddenly circling his boat's outline. He assumed the fish's weight to be twice of his boat He stabbed the fish with a masterstroke. He used his hope to the utmost Tied the fish to a side of his boat,somewhere thinking to take it to shore. He let the current have him whole, Fearing the sharks might sniff Sniff the blood off the big fish, In some hours or just a jiff. The first shark took the hefty bite, Before he got stabbed by Santiago's harpoon, The  second one took just a quarter bite, But before these two got dead soon, they took with em the half harpoon. The old man fashioned a yet new harpoon, Fixing the knife to an oak stick, He used it then for the sharks to come, But , oh! It split on a new shark's skull click. He fought, and fought, but oh, at last, The old man won, with the major loss He returned to the shore in moonlit night, & Found the fish just had a residual skeletal mass. He reached the shore, with tears of remorse Oh, how bravely did the old man fought! Though it was a ' Victorious loss' He thought while dragging the mast to shore while  Monolin  came running, discussing how he fought. The boy smiled at the bravery, the old man showed, He smiled at the old man like he saw a hero, He hugged him tight, &  smiled in delight And called Santiago,  'His  brave hero'! And so you see , this sad story Ends Santiago tried to help himself, But he needed the help of his Friend, To provide him with some worldly wealth.
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Aug 30, 2017
Aug 30, 2017 at 5:21 PM UTC
The Ballad Of An Old Man
Santiago set out to catch some fish, He sailed out further, then had his want And waited patiently with the prayer and wish With the remorseless lament. For awhile the boy, Malolin Joined this ole man, to learn fishing But the old man was, so dreary and weak Weak enough, to let go months resting. Manolin  was a a fair young kid, A kid of twelve or more Santiago was an old man, A man of eighty four! The boy got annoyed, And decided to leave Thinking the old man, Was disgruntled to perceive. But one fine day, when the sun smiled at this case The old man tried to set off his dismay He thought to go fishing & get his bait Like he did so happily, in his boyhood days! He set out, set again and caught some fish He sailed out further, and had his want. He saw a birdie, leading him to sea He caught more tuna,  and one bigger fish that fullfilled his want. He relished the tunas, the sea offered as  gift He loved how yummy, yummy it looked. But hardly noticed the deep line, the bigger fish had something big on it, that may further get him hooked. He used a small line, To snug a dolphin. That had in it two small fish They hid it it, Shining and smiling. He fought his need for sleep and fatigue, Of constantly keeping hold of line Before he saw the bigger  fish, Suddenly circling his boat's outline. He assumed the fish's weight to be twice of his boat He stabbed the fish with a masterstroke. He used his hope to the utmost Tied the fish to a side of his boat,somewhere thinking to take it to shore. He let the current have him whole, Fearing the sharks might sniff Sniff the blood off the big fish, In some hours or just a jiff. The first shark took the hefty bite, Before he got stabbed by Santiago's harpoon, The  second one took just a quarter bite, But before these two got dead soon, they took with em the half harpoon. The old man fashioned a yet new harpoon, Fixing the knife to an oak stick, He used it then for the sharks to come, But , oh! It split on a new shark's skull click. He fought, and fought, but oh, at last, The old man won, with the major loss He returned to the shore in moonlit night, & Found the fish just had a residual skeletal mass. He reached the shore, with tears of remorse Oh, how bravely did the old man fought! Though it was a ' Victorious loss' He thought while dragging the mast to shore while  Monolin  came running, discussing how he fought. The boy smiled at the bravery, the old man showed, He smiled at the old man like he saw a hero, He hugged him tight, &  smiled in delight And called Santiago,  'His  brave hero'! And so you see , this sad story Ends Santiago tried to help himself, But he needed the help of his Friend, To provide him with some worldly wealth.
This is my first attempt to ballad :) lemme know how it was to you? If you've anything that I need to know bout editing this, please send me your suggestion through ur messages. Thankyou
Lavendergal
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Aug 30, 2017
Aug 30, 2017 at 5:21 PM UTC
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